Since it's fan art, it's nice to make a personal vision about the subject you're representing. An exact copy of your source material it's like making nothing, just that, a copy. Those meatballs maybe are cocoon for its preys, maybe the baby mutates on something more disturbing than himself when he eats(do you remember IT?). Fan art must be about recreating ideas.
Listen to me, kiddo. Being the lamp the only direct light source she has, you don't need a transparent fabric. Lots of clothes are more or less translucent, and depends on light conditions. Even so, the composition doesn't fall on sexual fetishes or have a particular intention on make us direct our eyes to her body. Maybe you didn't notice it, but there is a tumorous evil giant baby emerging from a vulva-like altar. That's weird, not the poor girl. I think it was pretty much your own moral misconceptions and twisted desires. Look around, there's a lot of hentai fan art everywhere, sometimes really disturbing. So please find a better place to your moral scandals.
PS: I hoped your critics were supported by your own skills. How wrong I was.
The length of this post indicates that you either have too much time on your hands, or just can't stand not being complimented.
Buuuuuut anyways, no, I don't really see fanart as a way to recreate some already existing work, unless its something humorous, or maybe youre doing some elaborate fan fic. This appears to be neither. I mean, if you really appreciated something in a serious capacity then you would make a copy of it because you liked it that way. Not because you saw it as something to improve on, that makes little sense.
You've no idea how many sexualized pics of teen characters there are out there. A scary place the internet be. My reaction to the transparent clothing was totally rational.
And my skills are perfectly awesome for traditional media and making comics.
Holy crap, Dan looks traumatizing! Some of the best Clock Tower art I've ever seen!!! I'm so glad that there are others who appreciate and love this game as much as I do. Absolutely superb!!!!!! <3 <3 <3